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Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

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Nowadays public transport became one of the most popular transportation in the world.
However
, some
people
 think that fare for transport has to be accessible in urban areas.
This
 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of free society transport and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of a
fare-free
 vehicle are it is financial aid for residents who even is not able to pay for the fare and it
also
 may be a reason for improving the
quality
 of
air
.
Firstly
,
fare-free
 will be like financial support for tourists, citizens, and students who do not have much cash to disburse for fares.
Secondly
, the
quality
 of
air
 can improve by reducing the number of cars
for instance
 if
people
 who drive cars stop driving, the
air
 will be less polluted. The buses will be used more by the number of
people
,
therefore
, decreasing cars can be influenced on
quality
 of
air
.
On the other hand
,
fare-free
also
 has some major disadvantages like reduction of government
money
 and crowded
people
 on the
bus
.the country will not be able to develop through tourism
in other words
 government can not receive
money
 from tourists.
For example
,
people
 who come from a different country will spend a lot of
money
 on transportation, hotels, and amusements.What’s more, the
bus
 can be completely got crowded with a huge amount of human beings which will even complex to enter on the
bus
.
for instance
, having a large number of
people
 on the
bus
 may be a great place for a virus.
However
, reduction of government
money
 and crowded can eliminate these advantages. To conclude,
although
fare-free
 has certain positive effects like financial aid and improving the
quality
 of
air
, it has an extremely opposite influence on the country’s economy and buses will be extremely crowded with passengers. I believe that these benefits of
fare-free
 don’t outweigh its drawbacks
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