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Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

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Nowadays public transport became one of the most popular transportation in the world.
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, some
people
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 think that fare for transport has to be accessible in urban areas.
This
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 essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of free society transport and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of a
fare-free
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 vehicle are it is financial aid for residents who even is not able to pay for the fare and it
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 may be a reason for improving the
quality
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 of
air
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.
Firstly
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,
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 will be like financial support for tourists, citizens, and students who do not have much cash to disburse for fares.
Secondly
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, the
quality
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 of
air
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 can improve by reducing the number of cars
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 if
people
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 who drive cars stop driving, the
air
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 will be less polluted. The buses will be used more by the number of
people
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,
therefore
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, decreasing cars can be influenced on
quality
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 of
air
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.
On the other hand
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,
fare-free
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also
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 has some major disadvantages like reduction of government
money
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 and crowded
people
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 on the
bus
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.the country will not be able to develop through tourism
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 government can not receive
money
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 from tourists.
For example
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,
people
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 who come from a different country will spend a lot of
money
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 on transportation, hotels, and amusements.What’s more, the
bus
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 can be completely got crowded with a huge amount of human beings which will even complex to enter on the
bus
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.
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, having a large number of
people
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 on the
bus
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 may be a great place for a virus.
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, reduction of government
money
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 and crowded can eliminate these advantages. To conclude,
although
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fare-free
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 has certain positive effects like financial aid and improving the
quality
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 of
air
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, it has an extremely opposite influence on the country’s economy and buses will be extremely crowded with passengers. I believe that these benefits of
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 don’t outweigh its drawbacks
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