Is it better to teach a child at home or in school? discuss the disadvantages of both topics

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Nowadays, it has been a widespread argument that homeschooling is effective for
children
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, others believe that
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school
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is a proper place for pupils to study. In
this
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essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion. On the one hand,
home
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is a
safety
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place with intensive systems and affordable
price
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. Absorbing curriculum materials will be effortless for
children
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if they have
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distractions. As a consequence, they may achieve an optimum result.
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, by allocating
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amount of money, homeschooling could become a proper method since parents only spend their money to pay teachers. To illustrate, if
children
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study in
conventional
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place, the budget allocation includes payment of facilities
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as a library, toilet, extracurricular, and canteen meals.
On the other hand
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, there are undeniable advantages
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encouraging a child to study in
school
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, by nature, everyone is a social person, in
school
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children
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can learn
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how to manage themselves to deal with other people.
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, in a diverse environment,
children
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are trained to articulate their desire without
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another friend.
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School
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The school
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makes
children
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to
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be
an
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independent
person
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people
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because they are used to
face
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unpredictable situations outside
home
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the home
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, with their parents,
children
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may act like a
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vulnerable
vurnerable
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vulnerable
, but once they go to
school
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they are out of their comfort zone. To conclude, teaching pupils at home may become the best choice,
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, parents should consider that pupils will get more
experiences
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by studying in
school
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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