You work in an international compny. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter - explain why you need this time off - give details of when you want the time off - say who can do your work when you are away

Dear Mr White I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to inquire about a three-month off. As you know, I have been working in

this

company for six years, and I am wondering if I will be eligible for a short period paid off. I aim to plan a trip to visit my family in Iran as I haven't met them since two years ago. Two years is a long time, and unfortunately due to the

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pandemic I couldn't take part in my brother's wedding ceremony.

Therefore

, it's a good time to plan to visit my country and reunite with my family. My wife and I have planned to buy flight tickets for

this

November to run away from Canada's winter for a while;

moreover

, in the

last

three months of the year my hometown, Ahvaz, has very cool weather, so we can take advantage of both cool weather in winter and visiting the family. During that time off period, Terry can take my responsibilities to move the project forwards and collaborate with stakeholders. Since we have had a lot of discussions regarding the project, he is totally onboarded and can lead the project as long as I am on vacation. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Faithfully, Saed Garmsiri

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