Doctor, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrity. Do you agree or disagree

It is often argued that individuals working in the medical and educational

profession

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should be given higher wages as compared to

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entertainers and sportspeople. I completely agree that

doctors

, nurses and

teachers

should be paid more as their contribution

towards

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society is indeed remarkable. Medical professionals are the life saviours whereas the

teachers

are the best guides who help in providing education for the students. Undoubtedly, both occupations serve the society and the nation in its development and

hence

should be provided more salaries. One of the best

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of their

role play

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can be seen at the time of the Covid pandemic when many

doctors

and nurses sacrificed their

life

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to save other people.

Therefore

, their devotion and dedication towards society

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unmatchable as compared to the actors or sports celebrity.

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,

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becoming a medical professional or a professor it takes years of hard work.

In addition

to

this

, their job profile demands day and night duties for serving

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mankind.

Moreover

, an increment in their salaries will definitely give them a

moral

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boost to perform better.

For instance

, in

America

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the government has raised the annual income of the people according to their work profile and

doctors

are paid

highest

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wages followed by the

teachers

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to be the noblest professions among all.

Hence

, for their selfless

efforts

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they should be given more perks and incentives. To conclude,

doctors

and nurses play an important role in serving people

in

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treating all

kind

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of ailments whereas

teachers

make careers of the students. The contribution of both the professions in their respective sector is outstanding. Henceforth, I firmly believe that they should be paid more in comparison to entertainers or

sportsperson

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.