Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir, I am writing to you with regard to my handbag which was lost during my flight from London to Vancouver
last
Wednesday. After leaving the baggage area with my luggage I realized that I have forgotten to take my handbag from the plane with me. To help you
further
in locating my
bag
I shall describe the
bag
’s characteristics. It is a black leather laptop
bag
with zippers. It has an outer pocket protected by buttons and a long strap for carrying the
bag
on one shoulder. The
bag
contains my laptop in the zipper compartment and its charger in the outer compartment.
Further
, it
also
contains my wallet in which you shall find around 150 dollars and my credit card. I hope that you will help me in
this
regard to find my belongings as soon as possible as it is of utmost importance to me to continue my office work. Thanking you Regards
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