Write a letter to the organizer of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concerns about the annually occurred festival in our town. As we all know, there has been held an annual festival, "The Family Gala", which has lots of fun and entertainment for the families.

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year, I visited it and witnessed the exciting activities which were going on over there. One of the best things I enjoyed a lot, is the variety of food stalls and different rides.

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, despite the difficult task to handle a large crowd of people, I found a great ambience and the maintenance and cleaning of the place were up to the mark. Because of excellent management and increased workload, I would like to actively participate in volunteering the management

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year to manage daily routine tasks and extend my services to support staff. You are requested to please let me know about the exact date of opening of the event, the skills I need to have in order to take part, the jobs and responsibilities which I will have to perform and the timings of the festival. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours' Faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

arsalanfarooqnedWed Jun 29 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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8 paragraphs

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Write a letter to the organizer of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include - Feedback about last year - An offer to volunteer - Questions about the festival

It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With deforestration, urban development and illigal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitats and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measuers can be taken to deal with this problem.

Some people believe that if people are allowed to buy guns, they will be able to protect themselves and the crime rate can be lower. To what extent do you agree or disagree？