You have recently started a new job. Write a letter to a friend about your new job. In your letter: - Describe the job and the company. - Explain how you feel about the job. - Discuss your future plans.
Dear Joey,
I hope you are doing well. I want to share some exciting news with you—I have recently started a new
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should I put forward my name to get training to be an astronaut.
I hope you will give your valuable advice on my plans.
Yours loving friend,
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logical structure
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single idea per paragraph
You might want to add transitional phrases or sentences to bridge different sections of your letter more smoothly.
complete response
The letter provides a complete response to the prompt, describing the job, explaining your feelings about it, and discussing your future plans comprehensively.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is highly suitable for a personal letter to a friend, conveying excitement and a sense of closeness.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are well-executed, making the letter feel personal and friendly.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,