Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are more than approximately 5000
languages
in the world, to assume. So not all
languages
are commonly used or spoken according to
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. And the most commonly used
language
is English.
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, other
languages
are not being
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or spoken which is leading to
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of some of the
languages
. And according to major part of the population variety of
languages
out
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there are better. I would totally agree with the major part of the population. There are the reasons: Despite the fact that there are so many
languages
all around the world but learning or knowing all would be a challenge and not supported by all as it is not important. Unless someone wants to participate in
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world record.
Although
English is the most commonly used or
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language
but not all country prefer it.
For example
in China if a foreign student wants to
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in a Chinese
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then
he/she
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to learn
Chinese
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language
. Which is I think to some
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unfair to the students as the student might not do well in his academy due to handling
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language
and his syllabus.
Furthermore
, whenever a person is travelling to different countries often they have to face difficulties in communication. As of what the native
languages
and many more. To some
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I believe the few the
languages
the better. When all of us communicate in a common
language
it will be easier to understand each other better. So I think
English
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language
should be made mandatory in all schools
besides
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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