Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
It is certainly true that
an
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apply
education
play
a significant role to make the life of Change the verb form
plays
students
prosper. It is generally claimed that the tertiary study
must be provide
to all pupils. Change the verb form
be provided
However
, some citizens opine that only intelligent should do a
graduation from Remove the article
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
university
.I will substantiate both views in the upcoming paragraph but i
agree with Change the capitalization
I
former
statement as its Add an article
the former
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responsibility
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the responsibilty
responsibilty
of public authority to give Correct your spelling
responsibility
education
to every citizen.
To begin
with, the positive outcome if Add a hyphen
college-level
college level
Add a hyphen
college-level
education
available
for learners Add a missing verb
is available
then
they would acquire knowledge to get job
or startup Correct article usage
a job
business
in their life.There are numerous jobs like doctor, Correct article usage
a business
lawyer
which require a Correct word choice
and lawyer
degree
. In university
students
do degree
to learn practically as well as Add an article
a degree
theortically
because at present Correct your spelling
theoretically
theoretical
a
companies have Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
requirement
that new employees must have a Add an article
a requirement
the requirement
degree
so that they can easily start his/her job
without requiring any practical practise
. Replace the word
practice
For instance
, Companies such
as the Amazon hiring
people who have an Wrong verb form
hire
education
from well known
universities Add a hyphen
well-known
instead
of just recuriting
people who do not Correct your spelling
recruiting
study
after secondary education
. Consequently
, for
giving more Change preposition
to
job
Correct your spelling
opportunities
opporounities
to Correct your spelling
opportunities
youngster
public authority must propel Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
to
teenagers for Change preposition
apply
education
.
On the contrary
, Many
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many
students
do not want to study
after the
school Change the word
their
education
. They either want to a start job
which dont
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don't
require
Change the verb form
requires
any
a Correct quantifier usage
apply
degree
or they want to travel across the world. But due to family or peer pressure and fees pay
by the government they take Replace the word
payable
an
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apply
admission
in
the Change preposition
into
university
curriculum. which results they
do not Change preposition
in they
pay
attention to Wrong verb form
paying
study
and get fail in a course. Wrong verb form
studying
Therefore
, the university
must have an admission
eligility
exam which children Correct your spelling
eligibility
needs
to pass to get Correct subject-verb agreement
need
the
Correct article usage
apply
admission
. For example
, In India
there is Add a comma
,India
exam
for getting Add an article
an exam
the exam
course
in the Add an article
the course
a course
university
.Thus
, only those students
are get selected who are intelligent and pass the exam.
I think ,
public Remove the comma
apply
authority
give free Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
education
to every citizen. So that teenager can do qualified degree
from college and get beneficial
Add an article
a beneficial
the beneficial
job
and there would be less unemloyment
in a country if Correct your spelling
unemployment
employment
students
are well educated.
In conclusion, University
ought to provide Fix the agreement mistake
universities
education
to every children
for Change to a singular noun
child
their
better future but Change the word
a
also
they must have some creteria
to Correct your spelling
criteria
admission
in
college.Change preposition
to
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