Some people believe that allowing children to male their own choices on everyday matters(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different opinions about whether

parents

should let their kids decide on

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daily basis and some agree

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but some are worried if

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would produce

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people. Personally, I think that we should let them decide but

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should not be on the edge. ​On the one hand, children who are raised by very strict

parents

turn out to be introverts in

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society. As a kid, they had to follow every single instruction of their

parents

regardless of what they wanted to do.

For instance

, their talent may be in playing games or doing things concerning

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technology. But their

parents

’ hope is for them to become doctors or engineers. They cannot try what they are really interested in and they become people who do not have ambition. So, it is very important to let children decide or think

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they want to do

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they were young. ​

On the other hand

, children who grew up in a very open relationship with their

parents

usually become a person who does not have empathy

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others.

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happens because they always had what they wanted from their guardian and did not have to think

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it is good or bad. It is not their fault but their

parents

’. They should be taught whether they are being reasonable or not by their elders to make sure they know that everything cannot appear in front of them like in the movies.

That is

why it is

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essential to control some of their emotions when they were young. ​

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, I am raised by my

parents

and taught to think about every probability and

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before I do something. Today, I became someone who knows what I really want and at the same time

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empathy for others that

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have to communicate.

Thus

, I believe that it is the

parents

’ most important duty to make sure their kid is on the right track at

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.