Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
claim that sharing almost of
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all of
data
in scientific research
, business
and the academic world is a suitable one. However
, others think that there are some data
which are too precious or important to be shared without thinking too much.
Beginning with the fact that some people
believe that sharing as much information
as possible can make them knowledgeable, educational and up to date and another thing is their curiosity. If they know all of the information
, they will be familiar with these areas. Moreover
, they can find not only opportunities but also
challenges from knowing some information
. After that, they envied some people
such
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businessmen
business men
, scientists and technologists. They will attempt to follow the steps and have Correct your spelling
businessmen
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a goal
goal
in their life. One of the habits of Fix the agreement mistake
goals
people
is curious
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that
they want to understand everything whether it is essential or not for them since they were born. After they have known about something they want to know, they are quite satisfied in their mind.
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Secondly
, some people
assume that some information
should be clandestine and private because there are many terrible impacts on their research
if public
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the public
know
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data
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research
that consumed too much time as well as energy. The more tired they are, the more clandestine the information
. Subsequently
, they do not want to share openly because in other cases, it is better that
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than
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the public
do
not need to know. Change the verb form
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For instance
, we have been applying phones whereas we are not vital to know how phones were invented. And then
, there may be horrible impacts on their research
because other people
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, as well as business men,
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businessmen
business men
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businessmen
result
.
In conclusion, to my way of thinking, it is better to share Fix the agreement mistake
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data
in scientific research
, business
and the academic world because I am the curious one and I believe that I can get opportunities from knowing all data
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