Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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claim that sharing almost
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the
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in scientific
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and the academic world is a suitable one.
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, others think that there are some
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which are too precious or important to be shared without thinking too much. ​Beginning with the fact that some
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believe that sharing as much
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as possible can make them knowledgeable, educational and up to date and another thing is their curiosity. If they know all of the
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, they will be familiar with these areas.
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, they can find not only opportunities but
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challenges from knowing some
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businessmen
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business men
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, scientists and technologists. They will attempt to follow the steps and have
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in their life. One of the habits of
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they want to understand everything whether it is essential or not for them since they were born. After they have known about something they want to know, they are quite satisfied in their mind. ​
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, some
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assume that some
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should be clandestine and private because there are many terrible impacts on their
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know
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their
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some
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that consumed too much time as well as energy. The more tired they are, the more clandestine the
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, they do not want to share openly because in other cases, it is better
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public
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the public
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do
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not need to know.
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, we have been applying phones whereas we are not vital to know how phones were invented. And
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, there may be horrible impacts on their
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because other
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want to castigate. Because of their bad
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, scientists
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, as well as business men,
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businessmen
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business men
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businessmen
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may be confused about their
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. ​In conclusion, to my way of thinking, it is better to share
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in scientific
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business
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and the academic world because I am the curious one and I believe that I can get opportunities from knowing all
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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