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The chart illustrates the proportion of
first
-year
teachers
who have usual teaching
jobs
after graduation in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. The
figure
is made up of two types of
teachers
who teach
English
and French. According to the data,
teachers
teaching French-language decreased dramatically in the
percentage
of having
jobs
during the time. While 70% of French-language
teachers
had
jobs
in 2001,
however
,
this
figure
fell by approximately 20% in the
next
year. Plus, the
figure
rose slowly in the
next
5 years. The largest
percentage
of
this
figure
is in 2007 when there was a peak at 75%.
On the other hand
, the period between 2001 and 2003 saw the unstable trend of
English
-language
teachers
having
jobs
. The
figure
had decreased enormously.
Although
both
English
and French-language
teachers
had a similar
percentage
at the beginning of the period,
Besides
that in 2001, the figures for
English
and French
teachers
were approximately the same as each other. The
figure
had risen slightly by 5% between 2003 and 2005 and
then
surprisingly fell to below 30% in the year 2007. Overall, the
percentage
of
first
-year
English
teachers
having
jobs
has increased since
English
has become a popular language in the world while the trend of French
teachers
is
in contrast
.
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