Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

With the global pandemic situation that we experienced around the world, I think everyone should agree with the statement “Preventing is better than cure”. Without thinking twice I stand up with those who support
this
notion and I will admit my point with two examples along with a summary in the essay.
To begin
with, let’s look at the most recent experience that we had with COVID-19. Though the COVID was highly spreadable, we could have prevented it from happening if we were following the health guidelines thoroughly.
For instance
, In Sri Lanka during the
first
COVID wave, staff members of a particular garment factory got affected by
this
virus. After, an investigation was carried out by medical authorities
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and found that they were not admitters of health regulations which was given by the Public Health Instructor. Because of their irresponsible manner, not only a particular factory a whole village went in isolation. If they could act wisely these people could have been able to save a lot of money which was spent after doing sanitization.
Furthermore
, when we explore the reasons for having a dengue fever just after every monsoon, it
also
points towards negligence of the public. As we Sri Lankans, if we had a proper way to do dumping there will no room for mosquitoes to lay the eggs, since these insects are the carriers of the dengue virus. That will
also
result in saving a huge amount of unnecessary spending money. Because
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each year government invests a large sum of funds to do research and allocate staff in order to educate the public. While considering all the facts, it is clear that stopping something happens is pretty much easier than paying for what comes after
as a result
of ignoring things.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proactive
  • preventive measures
  • lifestyle diseases
  • public health
  • healthcare expenditure
  • cost-effective
  • chronic conditions
  • early detection
  • immunization
  • health promotion
  • risk factors
  • non-communicable diseases
  • disease surveillance
  • preventive diagnostics
  • health literacy
  • universal healthcare
  • primary prevention
  • secondary prevention
  • tertiary prevention
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