Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Nowadays, humankind is concerned about different environmental problems caused by human activity. A vast majority of species were eradicated during the

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decades. Some

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deem that

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impact on wildlife is irreversible;

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, others consider that a lot can be done to avoid

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destroying

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nature. In my opinion, especially

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should think more about various ways to save animals and plants. On the one hand, human activity condemned a great number of species to death and some of them are on the brink of extinction.

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many

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consider that it is too late to attempt to save any animals or plants.

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, there are only two White Rhino representatives and both of them are males.

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can do nothing to revive the population of

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. I reckon that

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a situation is an explanation of some

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and decisions.

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, a lot of species are still alive and we can prevent their eradication. Mankind has a hope to help animals and plants which are so vulnerable to human

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, numerous animal shelters and reserves can be constructed to become a new

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for those whose habitats were destroyed. Plant nurseries are

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a great decision to avoid their extinction. So, some individuals’ suggestions are not groundless and we should make efforts to save wildlife. To sum up,

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have various opinions about their ability to help

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wildlife. Both sides are right,

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, I reckon that we should not give up but we ought to try to change the situation and our actions.