You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr Albert, I am Nimal Pathiramna and I rented your no. 205

apartment

for

month. I am writing to inform some issues regarding

this

. I am unable to come after

this

month to the

apartment

due to I have to go abroad

day

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after tomorrow for a training programme and I come back after two months.

Therefore

, I kindly request from you, do not

hire

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to hire

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apartment

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for

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another customer. There are several problems regarding my family too. My elder son will be

faced

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facing

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Advanced Level Examination in

subsequent

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month and my younger daughter is following a computer course and it will finish after two weeks.

That is

why

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the

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rest of the family could not come and stay

your

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at your

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apartment

. Considering my situation, please give me some time to resolve my terrible.

However

, I hope to come and stay in your

apartment

after two and half months. I highly appreciate

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if you can wait until I come to hand over your

apartment

that I rented. Yours Sincerely, Nimal Pathirana

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7 paragraphs

172 words

6.50

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Clear and correct grammar

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