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Your next-door neighbors like to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter -describe the situation -explain the problems it is causing you -offer at least one solution

#neighbors #music #night #manager #-describe #situation #-explain #-offer
Dear Mr Tom, I have been living in
this
 apartment building for almost six years now. As you know I have always been a good tenant. I am writing
this
 letter to you because I have a problem with my neighbour. Lately, Ms Ann moved into apartment Block A Room.211, right
next
 door to me. She tends to enjoy listening to music late at night ,especially after midnight. The music was very loud and I could easily hear it in my bedroom. It made it very difficult for me to fall asleep. I have to get up at 6 A.M. in order to get to work on time.
However
, I told her about her noise but she acted rude manner to me
that is
 the worst neighbour I have ever seen. I would like you to remind her again about the building regulations and post the rules notice in front of the corridor that all the tenants of
this
 floor can see. Thanks in advance for giving the matter your attention. Sincerely, Hamada
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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