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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, as a consequence of the covid pandemic, online calls have become more prominent than physical interactions.
Therefore
, the only best and safest way to handle work meetings in
this
 situation is through online connections.
Firstly
, the conference touch points are scheduled online resulting to work from home.
As a result
, employees can attend from their place
thus
 saving the time spent on transportation from their residence to the office and vice versa every day.
For instance
, depending on traffic, if it takes 2 - 4 hours to travel up and down, the workers can save and utilize
this
 time efficiently and don't exhaust quickly.
Additionally
, from the firm's perspective, it can avoid the daily operational expenses like power, maintenance, and additional resources to run the organization physically. On Contrary, there are some detrimental factors preferring online communication over physical meetings. Socializing with colleagues is equally imperative in the working environment helping in building relationships.
For example
, I recently met my colleague at the office where we felt more connected to each other.
Instead
, the hybrid job culture could tackle all these listed problems. In conclusion, online interactions provide benefits that are proven to be time-efficient with minimal operational costs overshadowing their demerits which can be
further
 resolved.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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