MANY MANUFACTURED FOOD AND DRINK PRODUCTS CONTAIN HIGH LEVELS OF SUGAR , WHICH CAUSES MANY HEALTH PROBLEMS. SUGARY PRODUCTS SHOULD BE MADE MORE EXPENSIVE TO ENCOURAGE PEOPLE TO CONSUME LESS SUGAR DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
THERE IS A POPULAR ARGUMENT OUT THERE THAT THE READYMADE FOODS AND BEVERAGES CONTAIN A HUGE AMOUNT OF SUGAR, WHICH RAISED HEALTH CONCERNS . SO THESE CAN BE CHECKED BY INCREASING THE PRICES OF
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WITH,THE MAJORITY OF THE PUBLIC HAVE A HABIT OF EATING FOODS WHICH ARE TASTIER AND CHEAPER. SO IF THESE HIGH-CALORIE EDIBLES CAN BE EFFECTIVELY DISCOURAGED TO A LARGE EXTENT BY PUTTING A PRICE TAG HIGHER THAN THE OTHER THE GOOD OPTIONS .EVENTUALLY, Linking Words
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WILL REDUCE THE PREVAILING LIFESTYLE DISORDERS EXISTING IN THE COUNTRY THEREBY REDUCING EXPENDITURE ON THE HEALTHCARE.Linking Words
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IN CALIFORNIA STARTED TO HAVE COCA-COLA AND PEPSI AFTER ITS INTRODUCTION AS IT COST THEM VERY LESS COMPARED TO HAVING A FRESH FRUIT JUICE.Use synonyms
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IN TURN INCREASED THE TOTAL NUMBER OF PATIENTS SUFFERING FROM DIABETES.SO Linking Words
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, A RECENT STUDY CONCLUDED THAT THE CUSTOMERS IN SUPERMARKETS PREFER TO BUY THE FRUITS AND THE VEGETABLES WHEN IT IS AVAILABLE AT AN OFFER PRICE EQUAL TO OR LESS THAN THAT OF THE MANUFACTURED ONES.Linking Words
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