You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.

Dear Sir, I'm
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to let you know that
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i'm
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I'm
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interested in organizing my
firms
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new product launch
event
in our community
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since the location is closer to most of my
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colleagues
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. let me explain
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the proposed plan
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the
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. The guests for the occasion are mainly
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people and as of now the maximum number of people invited
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30. The timing of the launch is around 9:00AM and will be closing by 2:00pm. We are providng morning snacks and coffee which is outsourced. In regards to the number of table, we will require 5 large rectangle tables to serve the food. Would you kindly help us to grant us the permission for conducting the
event
. In, addition i would
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like to take the responsibilty of the community resources. The
event
will be held quietly and will not disturb any of our society member. Looking forward for your reply, Thank you Your faithfully, Mani
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Community center
  • Office event
  • Organize
  • Facilities
  • Availability
  • Reserve
  • Date
  • Time
  • Duration
  • Number of participants
  • Budget
  • Catering
  • Equipment
  • Setup
  • Decorations
  • Entertainment
  • Parking
  • Assistance
  • Collaboration
  • Appreciate
  • Gratitude
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