You need to organize an office event in a community center. Write a letter to the center.
Dear Sir,
I'm
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to let you know that Fix capitalization
writing
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I'm
i'm
interested in organizing my Change the capitalization
I'm
firms
new product launch Change to a genitive case
firm's
firms'
event
in our community center
since the location is closer to most of my Change the spelling
centre
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colleagues
colleauges
.
let me explain Correct your spelling
colleagues
you
the proposed plan Change preposition
to you
of
the Change preposition
for
event
. The guests for the occasion are mainly working class
people and as of now the maximum number of people invited Add a hyphen
working-class
are
30. The timing of the launch is around 9:00AM and will be closing by 2:00pm. We are providng morning snacks and coffee which is outsourced. In regards to the number of table, we will require 5 large rectangle tables to serve the food.
Would you kindly help us to grant us the permission for conducting the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
event
. In, addition i would also
like to take the responsibilty of the community resources. The event
will be held quietly and will not disturb any of our society member.
Looking forward for your reply,
Thank you
Your faithfully,
ManiSubmitted by manikanthreddy81 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite