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Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is money a true indicator of the success of a business? In what other reason might success in a company be assessed?

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Nowadays possessing a
business
 is considered to be
the
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wealthiness
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 indicator
as
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 its running demand much time, effort and knowledge. Some people believe that only
business
 outcomes can point out if it is enough successful or not, at the same time others take
also
company
 annual growth and reputation into account. Due to the fact that one of the main
business
 purposes is income, money should be considered
as
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a significant factor
of
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 its success. If the
business
 is being run by a talented human being, it will definitely bring large sums. So, if a
company
 sells good products, the demand for them will always be high, resulting in a large profit.
On the other hand
, income is not the only
one
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factor to focus on when running a
company
. A good
business
 should
also
 be attractive, reliable and recognizable. Low-quality goods or services will bring the
company
 money only in the short term. So that income does not exist without customer confidence, which in turn depends on other non-price factors. To conclude, revenue is crucial for the viability of an enterprise.
Nonetheless
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 success can be determined only by analysing its reputation and other factors as described above.
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