6.Your friend is going to stay in your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to your friend and include: Where the key is Instructions to look after the apartment What should he/ she do on the day of your return

Dear John, Hope you are safe and healthy. I am glad to hear that you are coming to my house and

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me to take care of everything. Since I will be away from home for a couple of days, you may need the key to enter my room. The room key is placed on the top of the shelf near my doorstep. You may easily differentiate it from others as it is tied with a yellow string. Please help me to walk my dog while I am away. Josh is a 3 years old lovely golden retriever and you may become his best friend in a matter of seconds as he is very sociable. By the way, do not turn on the dishwasher because it is broken. I will come back by Friday, so don't panic if you encounter any problems. You may contact me by email or phone at your convenience. I will take you to the best restaurant when I am back if we still have time. Cheers Clarence

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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0Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

172 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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