Some people think that the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the debatable concepts of today's world is

university

education

. A bunch of personages claim that the main reason for the

succeed

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life is the

university

education

is a just argument , howbeit there

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some disagreement with it and say that it is not true . In

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discourse , I will explicate both stances before presenting my opinion . on one hand , the crusaders of the high

education

express their support

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valid grounds .

Firstly

, the simplest exposition is development . To be more specific , these days they see

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considerable development in all areas of life , so they should pay attention

on

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this

point , especially in

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education

.

For example

,

Oman

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education

face

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a huge change in all categories . Actually , in

this

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no one can leave without learning . Another point to put here is income .

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, they are increasing the level of

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income through the graduate people . In comparison , the salary of Ali and Fahad were 1,000 R.O and 300 R.O respectively

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Ali has

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education

that why he was the highest salary . Reasoning from the other side , partisans of people who disaccordance with the given statement proffered plentiful reasons to show their prospectus . In the

first

place , alteration . To rewords , they are using their idea to open their businesses

instead

of

education

and work with other companies . For an instance , Salim

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made

mades

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made

his company in 2,000 ,

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subsequently

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his income is more than his friends who complete their

study

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.

Moreover

, another outlook of them is comfort . way of explanation , they are relaxing due to they do not have the

exames

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exams

in that time ,

on the contrary

, the other humans who learned in the college . To summarize the composition , the essay explicated both views with credible examples . Regarding

this

issue , obviously the

first

argument

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than the

second

. So , I fully agree with the

university

education

is the main reason to

succed

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succeed

life .