You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter -say which points in the article you agree with -explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres -offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am an avid reader of your esteemed newspaper and have

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yearly subscription too. I am writing in connection to a fallacious piece of information which was printed on

first

June. There was

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write-up on page number three under the travel guide

coloumn

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column

describing Indian town

centers

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. I appreciate a paragraph

which

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that

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explicitily

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explicitly

described commuting modes.

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, it

also

highlighted that all the places had uniform

centers

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This

is not a true case as each and every centre is diversified according to its regional taste.

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centre in

South

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whereas colour and vibrant forms are used

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the West side.

Moreover

, paintings of the cultural festivals are displayed as per the state's culture.

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the theme is similar, all the places have patterns as per their locality. I will be happy to chalk out one day tour and accompany you to show these hub

centers

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. Looking forward to hearing

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on the same. Yours faithfully, Devika

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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