The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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In
this
report. I will describe a chart that shows the figure
of
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for
show examples
Japanese
visitors
travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and
Australia
’s share of the
Japanese
tourist market.
According to
the first chart, the figure for
Japanese
visitors
visiting abroad has increased each year except for 1991.
Initially
, In 1985 about 5
million
tourists from Japan travelled and after 10 years
this
number got trebled approximately.
Also
in 1985, About 2
million
Japanese
tourists went to
Australia
. From 1985 until 1988, The figure of
Japanese
travellers in
Australia
increased dramatically. Beginning from 2
million
tourists in 1985, It reached
to
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apply
show examples
about 5
million
in 1988. From 1989, The statistic fell slightly, But from 1990 to 1994 the number has risen.
However
, the number of
Japanese
visitors
who went to
Australia
in 1994 decreased.
finally
, The 2 charts show us the increase
of
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in
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Japanese
travellers travelling to different countries
as well as
the sum of
visitors
in
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to
show examples
Australia
in particular
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, visitors, million, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • decade
  • fluctuation
  • consistent growth
  • market share
  • peak
  • period
  • significant
  • trend
  • indicate
  • tourism industry
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