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companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?

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It is irrefutable that the vast majority of
companies
 are working in
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 race to increase the sales of their
products
.
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kind
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kinds
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 of ways which
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lead
leads
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lead
 to
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a rise
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rise
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raise
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sales
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in sales
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 level among with put
spotlight
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 on the best method. To commence with the methods which are being adopted by
companies
 in improving the sale of their
products
. To answer it, in
this
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 era, they are not only offering
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a discount
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discount
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discounts
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 on various types of
products
 but
also
 selling
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 reasonable prices.
Also
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 they replace the damaged
products
instead
 of repairing
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them. warranty of items is being increased reaching at the top by manufacturers.
For instance
, a survey
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conducted by multinational
companies
 in 2015 found that more than 20%
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of companies
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which
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were ensuring the guarantee of things in which turn they made
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a good
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 image in the market thereby selling
products
 on
guarantee
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the guarantee
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.
Hence
, both guarantee and warranty play important role in picking up the sales of
products
. Shifting towards the most effective method, it can be seen that a large number of
companies
 are providing
better
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quality
of
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products
 either online or offline along with
latest
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the latest
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 models of things. It is the best way to climb the ladder of success in regard to escalating the outflow of goods as
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the customer
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customer
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customers
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 often spend a lot of money for seeking
quality
.
For example
, the headline of "The Moscow
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" revealed that the demand of
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iPhone
 is mushrooming worldwide on
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 of its
quality
 as well as unique features.
As a result
,
influx
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the influx
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 of better
quality
of
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products
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 come globally. In conclusion,
companies
 are not only using many methods for achieving economic success but
also
 for evolving the old version of things and
this
 practice
also
 leads to the development of household electrical appliances.
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