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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing, whilst see it as something negative which should be avoided discuss both views and give your opinion

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Adolescence is a time when independence and parental influence clash. Since teens
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 able to think on their own, they have to live with their
parents
 who have some rules and expectations of them. Teenagers do not hold the same values and beliefs as their
parents
. Their goal is to have fun but their
parents
 want them to keep safe. In
this
 ,essay we will discuss both views and give our opinion. There are several reasons to have
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conflict between
parents
 and their growing children to name but a few.
Firstly
 the main topic of quarrel is "restriction" to argue about. Parent's always get worried if their kids
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 show up at home at the specific time given by them. ,
Secondly
 excessive use of cellphone by their children and the
parents
 having to pay their high phone bills ties to another source of conflict.
Last
 but not least is their personal appearance, youth always want to keep themselves updated on the latest trends
such
 as piercing, making tattoos on their body, and doing some crazy hairstyles, and their
parents
 want that they should always be in a traditional look and
this
 led to a dispute between them. To resolve these conflicts between them they must speak to each other thoughtfully rather than blaming or yelling at each other.
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 they can make decisions together on certain issues, and ,
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 they focus on the same goals which usually include keeping themselves safe and succeeding in life. To sum up, in my ,opinion teenage years is one of the most difficult times in a person's life. I believe family is the holiest mansion and adolescents should be free to be against their
parents
 irrespective of any influence factors or new temperament.
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