At present, the media affects people’s life significantly. What impact does this have on the society? Is it a positive or a negative development?

THE RECENT REVOLUTION IN THE DIGITAL
MEDIA
HAS HUGE IMPACT ON OUR LIVES.
THIS
ESSAY DISCUSSES THE INFLUENCES IT HAVE ON THE PEOPLE'S LIFE AS WELL AS THE NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT IT HAS BROUGHT IN .
TO BEGIN
WITH,THE PREFERENTIAL SURGE IN THE USAGE OF VARIOUS ELECTRONIC EQUIPMENT LIKE MOBILE PHONES,TABLETS AND LAPTOPS OVER THE TRADITIONAL ONES
SUCH
AS TELEVISIONS AND RADIOS HAVE MADE A HUGE SHIFT IN THE BEHAVIOUR , PREFERENCES , AND LIFESTYLE OF THE COMMON MAN.THESE APPLIANCES MAKE THE USERS SPEND MORE TIME WITH THEM WHICH DRASTICALLY REDUCED THEIR QUALITY OF SOCIAL LIFE AND PHYSICAL ACTIVITY.
ADDITIONALLY
,ESPECIALLY CHILDREN ARE BECOMING MORE VIOLENT AND LESS PATIENT .
AS A RESULT
OF
THIS
, THE MENTAL AND PHYSICAL HEALTH ARE
ALSO
SLOWLY DETERIORATING.
FOR EXAMPLE
, IT IS NOT SO UNCOMMON TO HEAR YOUNG ADULTS AND TEENAGERS GETTING A MYOCARDIAL INFARCTION OR AN ACUTE STROKE THESE DAYS . THANKS TO THE UNHEALTHY LIFESTYLE THAT CAME ALONG WITH IT.
SECONDLY
, LET US DISCUSS WHY
THIS
IS A NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT.THERE ARE VARIOUS REASONS FOR
THIS
, OUT OF WHICH THE MOST IMPORTANT ONE IS ONE THAT THE MENTAL HEALTH.PARTICULARLY THE SOCIAL
MEDIA
CURRENTLY PLAYS A MAJOR ROLE IN DECIDING WHAT IS RIGHT AND WRONG.EVEN THOUGH
THIS
CAN BE HELPFUL IN SOME CASES
HOWEVER
THINGS OFTEN HAPPEN VICE-VERSA.
THEREFORE
THIS
HAS TO BE STOPPED WITH THE HELP OF COMMUNITY EFFORTS AGAINST THESE ILL EFFECTS.
FOR INSTANCE
,INCREASED AWARENESS ABOUT THE IMPORTANCE OF BALANCED CONSUMPTION OF
MEDIA
FOR ENTERTAINMENT. TO CONCLUDE,CURRENTLY THE
MEDIA
HAS A LOT TO DO WITH WHAT,HOW, AND WHY WE THINK. KEEPING THAT IN MIND WE SHOULD MOVE FORWARD BY PROTECTING AGAINST THE NEGATIVE CHALLENGES IT BRING ALONG WITH IT.
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