you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job. write a letter to this friend. in your letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to the college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable well for him/her

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Dear admin how are you? I am very well and I hope
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letter finds you well.
Firstly
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,I want to say in my opinion, for you is better than finding a good job until going to
college
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because
college
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is more expensive and I do not
to
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apply
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like
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have a hard time in the future for Preparation of expenses
college
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and
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you are fully young so you can go to university 2 years later and today I think is better than you find occupation.
On the other hand
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,I believe if you can find a good job with a nice salary, you can go to the best university for a few more years so today you should go to work especially if you can enter a well-known factory or company maybe you will get a scholarship free,
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,you should go to the
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after that find a work.
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, I suggest you apply to each famous factory or company or office and try to enter. In fact,you can have a good salary and study if you can take it. writing for your reply, Lots of love, Saeed Foroughi nia.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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