Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.
Nowadays companies or employers try to encourage their staff through different types of offers like providing subsidised participation and so on. While other groups of people believe that it has no benefits for them.
This
essay sheds light on both views and a conclusion will be given in the forthcoming paragraphes
.
To commence with, membership Correct your spelling
paragraphs
of
any Change preposition
in
sports
center
is beneficial for Change the spelling
centre
employees
in many ways. Workers who have abilities of playing
Replace the preposition
to play
sports
but Correct your spelling
due
dur
to lack Correct your spelling
due
of
experience and equipment Remove the preposition
apply
they
did not do. So, Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
will provide them an
opportunity to play. There are chances that Add the preposition
with an
employees
may play well and reach at
Remove the preposition
apply
international
competition which could beneficial for Add an article
the international
company
. Healthy and fit body satisfied Add an article
the company
a company
employees
and it also
increase
Change the verb form
increases
strength
of working in Add an article
the strength
employees
that is
helpful for achieveing
target of Correct your spelling
achieving
company
.
On Add an article
the company
other hand
, the most significant and major thing is that providing membership Change the wording
another hand
other hands
of
Change preposition
in
sports
club
might distract workers from their job and work which may result in Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
drastic
decline in work output. Add an article
a drastic
Furthermore
, there are many employees
who are not interested in any sport
game or exercise that will no Change the noun form
sports
useful
for them. Replace the word
use
Employees
are interested in financial rewards, bonuses
which could improve their lifestyle. Correct word choice
and bonuses
In addition
, offers like on the job
training or day release programmes help Add a hyphen
on-the-job
employees
to improve their knowledge and could be innovative that
is beneficial for Correct pronoun usage
which
company
and Correct article usage
the company
employees
could get better chances to improve their post in company
. For Add an article
the company
a company
an
example, a record from CNC newspaper 45.7% Correct article usage
apply
employees
Change preposition
of employees
are
attracted by Change the verb form
is
offer
regarding financial rewards.
To conclude, there Change the form of the verb
offers
are
no disadvantage to Change the verb form
is
offer
job training but Wrong verb form
offering
subsidise
Wrong verb form
subsidising
membership
of Correct article usage
the membership
sports
clubs do have negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
company
.Add an article
the company
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