Some people spend most o their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?
Nowadays
people
are flexible and settle globally however
it has also
been observed that many individuals prefer staying in their hometown. In this
essay, we will explore a few reasons for them to stick back to their city and discuss merits
as well as demerits on the same.
Correct pronoun usage
its merits
Firstly
, some people
don't want to move out of their comfort zone. In other words
, they are complacent with their routine and not
kneen to explore opportunities elsewhere. Add a missing verb
do not
Secondly
, many of them have family responsibilities such
as looking after their sick parents or maintaining the house property. Lastly
, a few families are into business and they tend to continue with the same venture. Thus
, such
incidents hold back the countrymen to their respective places.
On the one hand, when one is born and brought up in a locality, he is well aware about
the town. Change the preposition
of
For instance
, while signing up for a
school admission or while buying a car, one could easily go to a well-known university or company Remove the article
apply
instead
of worrying and finding the best place to do so. Moreover
, people
will have constant support from their family as well as friends. On the other hand
, a person will miss the global opportunities which would have helped in boosting their work profile. Additionally
, their social circle will be limited and not grow in the future. Consequently
, they will not be able to tap their true potential.
To summarise, many people
reside and stay lifelong in their own locality to support their family members, business
and find it convenient. Correct word choice
and business
However
, they will not be able to meet diverse people
or may seek international work opportunities.Submitted by vaidyadevika1 on
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