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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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As the emergence of
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 leads to the depreciation of
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. Quite a several people support
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 development whereas others were of a contrary view. Portability and energy conservation are the merits of
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 while a lackadaisical attitude to studies and reading phobias are the demerits. The proponents of the rise of
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 see its advantages in the job market.
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, its portability to the user has made
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; soft copies of textbooks on our phones make it convenient and palatable to be consulted at any point in time and in any environment. Another merit of the emergence of
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 is the conservation of energy that could have declined
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 of carrying
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, leading to weakness of the body. Coming down to
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 innate perception that since they have those textbooks in their possessions, they can easily search for them and study
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 their convenience.
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 the reading phobia which
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 of the
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 conspicuous size thereby tending to aggravate phobia. These always
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 the alacrity of an individual to read. In conclusion, the invention of
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 to replace
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 is a wonderful idea and one of the steps to globalisation, but as it has
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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