You are facing a personal dilemma or need advice on a particular issue. Write a letter to a close friend or family member asking for their advice. In your letter: Explain the situation or dilemma you are facing. Describe the options you are considering or the help you need. Ask for their opinion or suggestions on how to proceed.
Dear Joey,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. Through this
letter, I want to open up my perplexing state of choosing steroid usage for my upcoming fitness competition and seek your expert advice on it.
Honestly, my situation right now is very confusing. Though I won the bodybuilding title in my hometown, now it is time for an inter-state championship and due to
the requirement of huge mass, my coach asked me to take steroids. After watching some side effect
videos of Dianabol, I am scared.
To handle my fear and chaos situation, I was thinking of taking an oral steroid Anavar rather than high doses of Igh which is less harmful and easy to remove from the body. Add a hyphen
side-effect
Moreover
, how about another option of taking some Ayurvedic medicines for this
purpose? However
, I have heard such
medicines take too much time to give results.
Being my best friend and a dietitian, It will be a great relief to me if you suggest which steroids are good for me and how to take them. Letting me know about the precautions to be considered before proceeding with my training and diet schedule will be helpful too.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours loving friend,
JacobSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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coherence & cohesion
To enhance coherence, it's ideal to maintain a logical progression of ideas. Your letter could benefit from a smoother transition between the dilemma and the options you are considering.
suitable writing tone
The tone is appropriate for a letter to a close friend, but you could include more expressions of emotion or personal anecdotes to make the letter even more engaging.
task response
You have clearly stated your dilemma and provided enough context for the reader to understand the situation.
coherence & cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with a problem statement, consideration of options, and a request for advice. This makes it easy to follow.
greeting & closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate and show respect and familiarity, which is suitable for a letter to a close friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,