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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #reason #language #travel #work #foregin #country #someone
Language
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a human
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human
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humans
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 over the world. Many say that there
are
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only
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the only
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 reason for learning other
languages
 is to travel or work. Others argue by saying that there are more different reasons for learning foreign
languages
,
as
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such
,
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knowing
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 other
culture
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cultures
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 or curiosity.
First
 of all, Overseas
languages
 are very important for travelling and working. For
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example
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, if someone wants to go to any western
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country
contry
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country
 they must know
English
, and if anyone wants to go there for working
purpose
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purposes
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 they
also
 need to know
English
.
Furthermore
, not only
western
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in western
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 country, foreign
langauges
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languages
language
 is essential for every
countries
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country
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, those who traveled from
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their own
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 country to another province. Another example, If
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a human
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human
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humans
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 wanted to work in
USA
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the USA
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 from Bangladesh, they must learn
English
, without
English
 they can not get
visa
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a visa
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for
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to
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USA
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the USA
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. For that purpose,
People
 gain knowledge and practice in
English
. There
are
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also
a
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English
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 for justifying their
English
language
 skills, called IELTS
english
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 test.
On the other hand
, Some learn foreign
languages
 for curiosity or
knowing
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to know
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 other
languages
.
For instance
, recently Korean
drama
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dramas
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 are becoming popular all
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over
ove
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over
 the world,
for
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 that reason, some
people
 learn
Koren
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the Koren
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language
. Mankind learned
this
language
 through some
cousing
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causing
counselling
centers
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centres
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 or many
onine
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online
 courses. Apart from
this
,
people
 learned other
languages
by
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of
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 curiosity, they are wanted to know other cultures through
languages
,
such
 as, if
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someone
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some one
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someone
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 learned
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Japanese
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the Japanease
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Japanease
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Japanese
language
, they can
also
 know the
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Japanese
Japanease
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Japanese
 culture.
Therefore
,
this
 type of learning
habits
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sometimes
somethimes
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sometimes
stop
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stops
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people
for
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from
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 doing their necessary
works
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work
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. To conclude, following
this
 look at both sides of the above debate,
i
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 believe,
people
 must know the foreign
language
 for travelling or working, Which will help them in the future. On the
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contrary
contary
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contrary
, learning
another
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another language
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languages
 without
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a
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special reason is
totally
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a totally
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 waste of time,
people
 can watch Korean
dhama
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drama
dharma
 with
subtitle
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, they do not need to learn another
language
 for that.
Hence
,
i
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I
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 recommended
people
 should only learn foreign
languages
 when they needed for travelling or working.

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