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Question: in the future, no body will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#future #body #newspaper #books
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Nowadays, with the advancement of technology, online resources are more available. I agree that
people
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 tend to read news or
books
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 through the internet
instead
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 of physical
books
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 because there are a lot of advantages of online reading. Many websites allow
people
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 to reach
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their
content
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 for free.
For example
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, fiction, documentary, and newspaper.
However
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, some online
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 platforms offer
subscription
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plan
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 for their readers. In order to read exclusive
content
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 or premium
content
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, they have to pay some money to them while
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 have limitations to read any
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 on that website.
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, there are many reasons why
people
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 prefer to read
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 via their
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 or tablet. The reason is they may not want to produce more paper waste.
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, some
people
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 think that when they read something through their tablet, they have more concentration than reading from real
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. There are
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 concerns about copyright
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 the internet. Because,
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 the internet, a lot of
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illegal
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contents
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 are approachable.
People
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 may reach
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these
contents
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 without paying anything. The copyright is the thing that we should be aware of and tends not to support those who post these
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 by avoiding
to read
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 them. The thing that we should do is report these
contents
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 to make them disappear and unavailable anymore. In conclusion, I totally agree that
people
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no longer spend their money
to buy
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newspaper
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 and
books
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 in the future. But, It does not mean that they can read everything online without purchasing.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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