Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of city and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, environmental problems are
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so planting trees is
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crucial role for the environment. Some are of the opinion that trees should be planted in the empty space of urban
area
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and
town
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. Whereas, others are opinion that housing
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should be constructed. I
agree
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the viewpoint confidently. My preference is explained
further
. The fundamental reason is that
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planting trees many advantageous
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environments .
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provide
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air and our needs
such
as vegetables, fruits,
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and many more. Nowadays, global warming
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rising so it
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air pollution but
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water pollution.
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spears toxic acid in our environment.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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