Humans are destined to age and tend to become generally unable to cater for themselves. It has been argued that younger relatives should be held responsible for the upkeep and
of the elderly in their family and that
should be enforceable with the backing of the law, others have
expressed their contrary beliefs on
issue. I strongly agree with the former school of thought.
Despite the fact that it is well known that as we age, we become quite reliant on younger
for strength, mental health and for finance, young
often have little or no time to do
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law. Who do we rely upon if not our immediate family members who are more vibrant and full of vitality and
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, it is trite that the warmth of close relations brings succour to aged
.
, it has been established that elders who are tended to by their grandchildren or offsprings fiar better than their counterparts who are in old peoples' homes
perhaps can be attributed to the strong emotional ties that bind them together.
, it has become desirable that young
be mandated not to neglect their old relatives as
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is currently the case in Japan.
Another thing to bear in mind is the fact that peculiar and remarkable interactions have been made between the persons concerned over time and that memories have been created within the clan that the old and young reminisce upon fondly.
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nowadays, the joy that comes with family time cannot be jettisoned.
, when I consider the benefit of
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of history and knowledge which benefits individuals and the entire country, through oral tales and
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traditions
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by the elderly to their younger
, I cannot but agree that the
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left with their younger
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legal enforcement.
,
have been passed down from
to
during interactions between the two sects and traditions have been preserved
way.
To sum up, I support that the younger
of each family be held liable for the
of their
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as
benefits not only the old but
the young and the entire nation.