With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays, few individuals view
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the increase
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in online
books
and a decrease in offline
books
as a great leap,
however
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,however
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others have
contrary
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a contrary
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opinion
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opinions
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.
This
essay will discuss the merits and the demerits of
this
trend.
Availability
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The availability
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and flexibility of e-
books
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one of the great advantages it has over paper
books
. A lot of magazines and journals are easy to come by on the internet, where you can read, save and
also
share them
to
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others at once, in different locations
with
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at
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low cost.
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last
year my colleague at work told us about an article,
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few
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a few
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minutes she shared it with everyone at the same time, which wouldn't have been possible with hard
copy
books
.
However
,
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the danger
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of
ultra-violent
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ultra-violet
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light rays associated with
usage
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the usage
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of
computer
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computers
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is a major
disadvantages
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. Ultra-violent light rays is a bad ray of light
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that
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damages vision and causes irritation to
eyes
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when exposed to it over a long time, online
books
will make a lot of people use systems and phones exposing them and destroying their lenses leading to
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visit to see an Ophthalmologist and usage of
eye glasses
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or a contact lens. A typical example happened when I read project works on my tablet or system,
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and I
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develop
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a headache
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headache
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and tearing eyes. To quite a few
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it is a
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, they would prefer not to read at all. In conclusion, though there is a growth in soft
copy
booklet over
hard
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the hard
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copy
as a result
of
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accessibility and
cost effectiveness
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which is a great achievement to some, others do not see it
this
way, because of the discomfort it usually
bring
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. From the benefits and drawbacks discussed in
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I will recommend that
,
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government
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the government
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should ensure varieties of hard
copy
books
in Public libraries.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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