All children should be made to wear school uniform. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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has been a constant subject of debate all around the world in recent years. There are many different opinions about

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regulation from the

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and state levels. As far as I am concerned, there are two main reasons that need to bear in mind, in terms of socioeconomic background. To start with, the cost of education is extremely expensive for

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lower-middle income people, even though there is some financial support from the government in terms of operational costs for the

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. If there is no regulation about

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, the students and parents are free to choose whatever outfit they want to wear based on their socioeconomic status—from high-class and pricey fashion brands

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as Louis Vuitton, Prada, and Gucci to the very affordable fashion

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as thrift fashion.

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jealousy among the students.

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, to decrease the social status gap and to make an egalitarian

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, I consider that regulating the

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will be beneficial for all the

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's components.

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, the

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is not part of the operation

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financed by the government,

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the

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should pay themselves to provide the

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for the students—either by buying it in the store or in the

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. It will burden the parents even more after paying some of the

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fees.

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, the regulation of paying for

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affordable

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should be enforced and even provided by the

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.

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, the guideline of wearing a

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would reduce the cost and energy

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about what to wear every day by the students.

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there are a number of different views regarding

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, I hold a view that

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rule should be enforced by the institution and supported by law from the educational agency,

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as the Education Ministry.