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Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Vaccinating
children
 has become increasingly unpopular among the demographics of society. Some people claim that
vaccinations
 are hazardous to
children
's health and are not needed.
This
 essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks. Parents have always been cautious about vaccinating their
children
. They are worried about injecting their infant with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents naturally feel protective of their
children
. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of
children
, unfortunately, reacting adversely to their injections.These few instances have led to existing fears in parents that
vaccinations
 are not necessary and potentially more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself. Despite some minor threats related to vaccinating
children
 , the idea that they are unnecessary and dangerous is completely illogical. Vaccines have prevented a vast number of death over hundreds
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years in countries around the world. The number of dead so far prevented outweighs the number of
children
 who have been adversely affected by the immunisations themselves. Some diseases have been actually eradicated through
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the vaccinations
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vaccinations
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 campaign. Overall the idea that
vaccinations
 are unnecessary and dangerous could potentially lead to
a far worse outcomes
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far worse outcomes
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 for society. To sum up, in my opinion vaccinating
children
 is an absolute imperative
that is
 entirely justified despite
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small and occasional risks involved.
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