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letter to you because I recently saw the job opening in the local newspaper and I had a keen interest in applying for
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job at the city post office during my holidays. My name is Sai Surapaneni, currently residing in Essendon. I am currently studying a diploma course in logistics at Latrobe University where summer break starts
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the logistics and the deliveries for the whole greater Essendon area were completely taken care of .
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month and joining your esteemed organization will not only provide me with a chance to acquire much-needed experience for the future but
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