Some people believe that children in schools should learn how advertisements motivate us to buy things. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, many people think that there is numerous attractive advertisement on the
tv
which attracts people to purchase things. Some people think that children should be taught by teachers
what is the motive behind the advertisement. I completely agree with this
statement.
To begin
with, children spend most of their free time in front of tv
and computers. They watch their favourite shows on tv
or youtube. While watching tv
there are numerous advertisements
between the show. Some are toys and some are eatable things. They make advertisements
so attractive using animations so that children get easily attracted. For instance
, one of my cousin's sons is really attracted by these advertisements
and then
he forces her to purchase clothes which were advertised by the first
-child store. She told him that their quality is not good but still, he forced and then
purchased it.
Moreover
, I personally believe that teachers
should give knowledge about these advertisements
to students. Students obey their teachers
and they believe that what teachers
said is always right. Teachers
should tell pupils that these advertisements
are to gain more popularity and clients. In reality, this
kind of stuff is not of good quality. To illustrate, In Sherwood school, this
is taught by teachers
to scholars and their students are good knowledge of advertisement.
To conclude, in my opinion, I personally think that this
is a really nice approach that advertisers force should tell their pupils not to buy stuff which you watch on tv
or youtube advertisements
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