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young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

#people #countryside #cities #towns #situation
You can a see a trend in many countries, a lot of young
people
 are leaving the countryside to live in
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cities
citeis
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cities
 and towns. In some countries it is worse than
others
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, a recent survey suggested that in America 5% of the young adults are leaving the countryside.
However
, in
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china
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this
 number is 10% and increasing each year. I will discuss in
this
 essay what I think the problems are that
causes
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this
 problem and what can be done to solve
this
 situation.
First
 of all, in many
countrysides
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 there is no proper education, which
result
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 in
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many students will go to the big city to study. For many
students
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 they will
also
 live there
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 because it is
to
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 far to travel.
This
 is the
first
 reason why young
people
 are leaving the cities and towns, because they now have new social lives and they often get a job offer in the city where they study, due to the
interships
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internships
internship
 that they do. There are many things that can be done to solve
this
promlem
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problem
. In my point of view, it is the travel time
that is
 the main factor in why young
people
 are leaving. All the big companies are located in city centres and you will not change that. So there are two options to help
this
 problem, the
first
 option is that
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companies
componies
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companies
 need to make it easier to
work
 remotely, with the current day technology it is possible to
work
remote
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. The
second
 option is to upgrade the public transportation, in
this
 way it is easier to get to
work
.
However
, the
house
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 market is now
sky high
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, so many young
people
 are forced to live in the countryside because they are not capable to pay the rent. So it is important that companies make it possible to
work
remote
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 and that the
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government
governement
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government
 invest in
the
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public transportation.
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