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Write about the following topic: In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed. In which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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The two diagrams illustrate information about four different agriculture productions in the Western and Eastern regions of a particular nation. Overall, The Eastern
region
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 produces more
meat
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 while the Western side has a lot of
grain
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 produced.
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 with, the Eastern
region
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 has the highest production of
meat
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 with 35%, followed by
grain
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 which stands at about half of that of
meat
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. The least manufactured agricultural produce in the Eastern side is vegetables and dairy with 20% and 30% respectively. On the Western side,
grain
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 and
meat
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 are produced in volumes. Dairy products are
third
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 in place with only 15% and vegetables the least produced with 5%. In both regions, the production of
meat
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 stands at 35%.
Also
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, the dairy generated in the Western
region
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 is half what is produced in the Eastern
region
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.
In contrast
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, the Eastern
region
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grain
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 is the least grown while it is highly produced in the Western
region
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.
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