Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to let you know that I am interested in working as a volunteer in your hospital. I used to work as a volunteer in the hospital's pharmacy when I was a high school student. Today, after fifteen years, I would like to do an unpaid

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in the hospital, for the

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time. The reason behind it is I would like to appreciate the hard work of

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and healthcare staff of the hospital. They did a great

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while my wife

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been hospitalizing there.

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, I think by doing a part-time

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voluntary

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I could make up

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their kindness. As I mentioned above, I

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worked at

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pharmacy years ago, so perhaps I can do the same type of task again.

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, as I have

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good expertise in computer science, I can help the Information Technology department of the hospital. I will be attending

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a conference regarding my

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Monday, and I will be available by the day after

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that

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July

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is a good time to start. I am Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Saeed Garmsiri

saeed.garmsiriMon Jul 04 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

volunteer
unpaid work
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dedication
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