Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to let you know that I am interested in working as a volunteer in your hospital. I used to work as a volunteer in the hospital's pharmacy when I was a high school student. Today, after fifteen years, I would like to do an unpaid
job
in the hospital, for the
second
time. The reason behind it is I would like to appreciate the hard work of
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and healthcare staff of the hospital. They did a great
job
while my wife
have
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been hospitalizing there.
Therefore
, I think by doing a part-time
voluntry
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voluntary
job
I could make up
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their kindness. As I mentioned above, I
have
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worked at
them
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pharmacy years ago, so perhaps I can do the same type of task again.
Moreover
, as I have
a
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good expertise in computer science, I can help the Information Technology department of the hospital. I will be attending
in
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a conference regarding my
job
next
Monday, and I will be available by the day after
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that
taht
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that
. So
Tuesday
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July
third
is a good time to start. I am Looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Saeed Garmsiri
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • volunteer
  • unpaid work
  • free time
  • dedication
  • healthcare
  • assist
  • patients
  • administrative tasks
  • commitment
  • flexibility
  • personal satisfaction
  • inspired
  • community service
  • contribute
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