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In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via Internet and leave without any face to face on that with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

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In the newly developed
Era
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 it is super feasible to shop, work and communicate with
populance
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populace
 through the
usage
 of
internet
 and many of a person could be lives without any face to face connection with other ones.
This
 essay would delve into the positive outcome than the negative.
First
 and foremost, in
this
 modern generation,
growth
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the growth
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 of technologies is increasing day by day. A faction of
people
 could shop through online media
such
a
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as
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flipkart
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Flipkart
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 amazon
instagram
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Instagram
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.
This
 is
such
 an easy way
for
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to
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 purchase things and
also
 get additional offers, gifts and so on.
In addition
 work from
home
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 online classes are
the
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another instance of
modern
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the modern
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 world it would help lots of
people
especially
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,especially
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 in
this
 pandemic.
For instance
, covid
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 digital media plays
vital
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a vital
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 role among
public
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the public
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.
Besides
, it is possible to maintain
the
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a
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long-distance
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long distance
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long-distance
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 relationship.
Furthermore
, the
people
 who
having
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have
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a disability
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disability
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 the online platforms are very useful
and
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helpful.
This
 could save time for the
people
 in
this
 competitive world.
Nevertheless
,
although
the
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apply
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social interaction is declining
by
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with
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 the
usage
 of
internet
 and the
people
 are getting into
the
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apply
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introvert
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behavior
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behaviour
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,
but
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apply
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the development of
internet
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the internet
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 is
such
 an amazing gift for the busy competitive
populance
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populace
 is a fact which should not be overlooked. In short,
the
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apply
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people
 fall into
isolated
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an isolated
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 world, but the infinite
usage
 of digital media is one of the
blessing
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 in
this
 modern busy life. Ergo, I strongly
believes
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believe
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 that purchasing, working and communicating
by
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through
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 the
usage
 of
internet
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the internet
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 is a feasible method as well as it is a positive development.
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