In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is no shortage of opinion on the correlation between the growth of the number of

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and having guns at home. But if I were forced to choose

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point of view, I would definitely agree that

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statement is the right

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. It is my firm belief that sum of

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increases due to owning weapons at the house for a total of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.

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with, I want to say that

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usage become uncontrollable and chaotic in countries, where the laws give a clearance to have

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at your own house. The black markets start to expand quickly with the regulations, and the problem to buy a weapon without having a license or medical approval disappeared. And these markets give freedom to malefactors to shoot other

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.

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, just a few years ago in the newspapers all around the world, there was news about a horrific massacre in Las Vegas, Nevada. The man killed over 50

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during a concert, just shooting from the apartment of the hotel nearby the event. And the most bizarre part is he had bought more than 20 different weapons in the unlegal market and brought all of them as luggage day by day to the hotel room. And no

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even asked him for what purposes he needed

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amount of arms. No doubt, it is clear to see how uncontrollable the market for guns can become.

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, there is a significant negative impact of the rap culture that popularize drugs and arms among young

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. Numerous video clips for music tracks are available on media platforms and millions of youngsters watch

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and want to be like their idols. So teenagers start thinking that having a

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is a good thing and try to buy

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for themselves to have at least at home. But the scary part is, that some of the

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are so influenced by the culture, that they start

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even in their schools. I remember when just at the beginning of

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year, there was a case of a 17-year-old-boy who killed over 12 kids in the elementary school near his house, just because he was angry about some noise from the children during the work days. And later, after being under investigation by the police, he told the justice, that

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of his idols did the same and he wanted to be as famous as him. For

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reason, I am totally confident, that popularizing arms through media clips incurs the increased number of

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every day. In conclusion, I strongly believe that a rising growth

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the number of

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is heavily correlated with the situation when many

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have guns at home. And as I mentioned before, it causes uncontrollable and chaotic

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usage and

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horrific massacres that we could prevent by not giving regular

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the right to own the

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, as we never know, what would be their

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thought.