Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individual can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

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public

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the public

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has more

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controlled

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by the politicians and the team of scientists than by

ususal

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person in solitary,but,there is a

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topic amongst nations and some believe each person has own power to

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the community,

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with the latter statement,but I am going to discuss both sides of

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argument. At

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,social life is a process which is identified by the general political lines by the

policy makers

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,

for example

, when the healthcare system is the

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centre for citizens that the government has been invested on through providing spaces to creating hospitals and having an effective academic

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to educating students to be

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professional

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doctors and gaining resources to reducing the

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of the treatments ,

however

, there are

also

many personal activities can be able to control some disorders

such

as diabetes, hypertension by replacing active lifestyle

instead

of sedentary in the personal decision, but we have known the effective health care system is a greater role to preventing from diseases and educating people to care of ourselves.

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, in attention to the importance of education to learn essential facts for handling future life ,It is well understood that there must be a general plan

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teaching our children and it needs

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basic infrastructures

such

as building schools, providing subways ,proper transportation system and access to enough foods for growing a healthy brain , so ,

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all things

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concise coordination between all parts of a country .

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, the great movement

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progressing on a nation will be

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by the government not a person,because social improvement distincts by the

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laws ,correct usage from essential infrastructures,so,

this

whole plan must

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by some specialists in many fields and the government should be a backbone for that.