You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:- - What activities you have planned - When the first meeting takes place and where

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Dear Sir, I am a regular reader of

this

newspaper and It publishes every news in a very organized way. I am writing

this

letter to make a request regarding the publication of information regarding the upcoming event.

Last

week, It has been decided by me that I will start social meetings in Park Street, Delhi. Anybody can take part in these gatherings irrespective of their age and gender. There are myriad activities which can be a part of these events.

Firstly

, It includes discussions related to the celebration of festivals in the community.

Secondly

, It

also

includes talks regarding the fitness and health of the population. It has been decided that the

first

meeting will be held on the upcoming Monday

that is

the 24th of July at 5:30 in the evening time.

This

meeting is scheduled to be held at the clubhouse present in the society.

Thus

, I want you to please publish

this

information so that people from different nationalities can take part in it. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on Tue Jul 05 2022

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