You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about – what course you are doing now – why you are not satisfied with that course – what course would you like to change to.

#course #college #change #director

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in order to make a request to change the

course

which I have taken during

last

month. Currently, I am doing a bachelor's degree in the field of commerce. My registration number is 42xxx. I opt for

this

course

in the month of June 2022.

However

, I want to change

this

stream. I opted for

this

because I was interested in

this

subject but now It is going over my head and I find it too much difficult to understand its concepts.

Although

I make efforts to learn it yet I am unable to cope with

this

Thus

, It would be really appreciable if you could change my

course

to BBA which has theoretical knowledge about business laws and it would be convenient for me to study

this

course

. Looking forward to hearing a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Sincerely, Kuljeet Kaur.

Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on Tue Jul 05 2022

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