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Most people agree that money cannot buy happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

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It is undeniable that
happiness
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 is key to a good
life
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. While money can make
life
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 easier but it cannot guarantee
happiness
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. In
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 ,essay, I will discuss why it is challenging to define
happiness
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 and the possible ways to achieve it.
Happiness
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 is hard to define due to two major factors.
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 because it is a subjective matter depending on an individual basis,
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, for some, having social connectedness
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 family or friends, defines their
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,
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 as during festive seasons where people prefer to spend their time with their loved ones. On top of that,
happiness
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 is very abstract, it can't be measured objectively and there is no
one
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 size fits all. While some people crave material things
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 as big houses or luxurious cars to measure their
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, others prefer having positive emotions
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 as peacefulness, tranquillity or contentment. So there is no
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 way to describe
happiness
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.
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, there are simple ways in achieving
happiness
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 and
one
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 most important thing is having met the basic needs in
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such
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 as food, shelter and company because these are important factors to human survival, without it
happiness
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 cant be achieved.
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refugees
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 camp where there is a scarcity of essential goods and
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 makes people suffer.
On the other hand
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, living on
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’s own values may help in attaining true
happiness
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 because it is a purposeful living
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 meaningful,
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 as accomplishing
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 goals and having psychological wellbeing. In conclusion, it is not easy to have
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 true meaning of
happiness
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 as it may vary from
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 to another.
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,
one
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 may still achieve it by having their essential needs met and living a meaningful
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.
Submitted by Jane on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subjective
  • universally
  • cultural differences
  • psychological factors
  • satisfaction with life
  • emotional balance
  • personal achievements
  • social connections
  • fulfilling relationships
  • sense of belonging
  • sense of purpose
  • physical health
  • well-being
  • financial stability
  • mindfulness
  • gratitude
  • positive thinking
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